CannibalDolphinJuice's Reviews

[LazyPanduh commission 2]

The animation in this is well done. The clocks and their hands are a fun touch that really bring this to life when in motion. Keep up this kind of work in your future pieces!

[LazyPanduh commission 1]

The art is good. Animation movement is fine but nothing to write home about. Sound would be a cool addition but isn't needed to enjoy this piece. Fun to glance at.

[Shower Thoughts (Reupload)]

The longer you experience the world I believe most people think about these things but what can an average person do about it without exploring their options right?
Pee-pee jokes aside the short was rigged up really well. Great lip movement, good audio, and cool background work.
Overall impressive stuff. My one big complaint about the short though was the shower audio overpowering the speech at the start. Awesome job keep it up!

KhyleThePixelPrince responds:

Thank you!

[Fly As A Pug And Touch Nothing! (READ DESC!)]

The level design is cluttered and not polished at all. Sprites are the usual game maker bunch nothing too special. Controlling your character is very difficult and death is nothing but a burden having to jump through hoops to restart the game in the browser.

I recommend you take some time to develop a game that's rewarding, something that makes you want to progress to the next screen. If you choose this type of layout start small then make a mess later on. Try looking at more puzzle games and study how those work, even the most basic flash games have had success just by creating short stories and interesting mazes.

[Privileges]

The art is interesting and the idea is fine but the more I play it the less I want to invest in it.
The severe lack of music, weird controls, and harsh scoring makes for a dull experience that can use a little polishing in the near future.

I can see this game being something good, just not at the moment.
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L'art est intéressant et l'idée est bonne, mais plus je le joue moins je veux investir dans elle.
Le grave manque de musique, les contrôles étranges et la marquage sévère font une expérience terne qui peut utiliser un peu de polissage dans un proche avenir.

Je peux voir que ce jeu est quelque chose de bon, tout simplement pas en ce moment.

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[Happy Easter or whatever I don't care anymore]

You have a great talent for character design. Linework is clean, colors catch your eye, and the effort made by you adding a background shows you care more than most when posting a short joke. Personally I'd like to see you continue your art further.

If you need a break because you feel drained go for it, always turns out for the better when you set aside some time for yourself and return later on. When you do come back you'll have a fresh mind with new goals set for your future pieces and that's when art becomes fun again.

[Coffee Break!!!]

Your art has a fun style that really works well for web comics. Browsed your recent work and I'm surprised that you only have a few views on here, keep at it you're setting yourself up for a fun career in the near future!

[The Worm(The Labyrinth)]

It calls to me, I enjoy this. Thank you.