CannibalDolphinJuice's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fly As A Pug And Touch Nothing! (READ DESC!)]

The level design is cluttered and not polished at all. Sprites are the usual game maker bunch nothing too special. Controlling your character is very difficult and death is nothing but a burden having to jump through hoops to restart the game in the browser.

I recommend you take some time to develop a game that's rewarding, something that makes you want to progress to the next screen. If you choose this type of layout start small then make a mess later on. Try looking at more puzzle games and study how those work, even the most basic flash games have had success just by creating short stories and interesting mazes.

[Privileges]

The art is interesting and the idea is fine but the more I play it the less I want to invest in it.
The severe lack of music, weird controls, and harsh scoring makes for a dull experience that can use a little polishing in the near future.

I can see this game being something good, just not at the moment.
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L'art est intéressant et l'idée est bonne, mais plus je le joue moins je veux investir dans elle.
Le grave manque de musique, les contrôles étranges et la marquage sévère font une expérience terne qui peut utiliser un peu de polissage dans un proche avenir.

Je peux voir que ce jeu est quelque chose de bon, tout simplement pas en ce moment.

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