CannibalDolphinJuice's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LazyPanduh commission 2]

The animation in this is well done. The clocks and their hands are a fun touch that really bring this to life when in motion. Keep up this kind of work in your future pieces!

[LazyPanduh commission 1]

The art is good. Animation movement is fine but nothing to write home about. Sound would be a cool addition but isn't needed to enjoy this piece. Fun to glance at.

[Shower Thoughts (Reupload)]

The longer you experience the world I believe most people think about these things but what can an average person do about it without exploring their options right?
Pee-pee jokes aside the short was rigged up really well. Great lip movement, good audio, and cool background work.
Overall impressive stuff. My one big complaint about the short though was the shower audio overpowering the speech at the start. Awesome job keep it up!

KhyleThePixelPrince responds:

Thank you!

[5 Walmarts With Fazbear Entertainment]

Animation is ok for a rushed piece. Fun, short, and colorful too. Made me chuckle.
The style is good. All the characters feel animated and show expressions that really hold the jokes together in this video. Keep it up!

[Cory in the House Theme Redux - MechaNateND]

Very 2008-esque. Nothing too new to Newgrounds (or anywhere else on the internet) at this point. The animation was simple and I think it was my favorite part due to its old style nature, but the audio didn't match the mouth movement so well. The colors are not that great to look at.
You should look into some basic complementary colors and match them with your character designs.

Your next animation needs to be more original if you want to improve on your product.

[Toasty Crow Fan animation]

An attempt was made but it wasn't great. It looks like you're using paint and animating your art through movie maker. People may think these applications are lacking but a lot can be made with these two applications when used with patience.

Take more time and draw a few more frames. Your artwork would look better if you drew more of your characters with thicker outlines and focused detail inside the shape.
After you draw some more frames animate them in sections to get the hang of evolving your style. There are tons of videos online that show you the best ways to animate for free so I won't sit here and write step by step what you should do, just use the advice I've given you to grow.

ChillzTue responds:

THANK YOU SO MUCH :3 btw I made this a long time ago so I got a tablet and stuff like that I don't animate like like this anymore but thanks anyway!!! :333
PLEASE SENPAI DONT HATE ME xD o//o

[Gwain Saga - Chapter 005]

I always wondered where those old animated comic style adventures would end up on Newgrounds, it's rare to see someone polishing a project like this.

Even though there's a lack of voice casting the comedy is okay enough to watch.
The music is recycled from other similar animations but I feel like it's poking fun at that aspect.
Characters in the animation are simple but not boring, nothing loses my attention more than bad art mixes and I feel it's balanced for the most part.
If I could change anything about the show I would find a few voice actors for the cast.

I'm not a huge fan of the MarioBros.Z genres but I do enjoy that people like you are posting content onto a well deserved website like this and I appreciate that it's not rushed and it serves the intended viewer well with a generous eighteen minutes worth of content.

[TD-Computers]

Painfully relatable! It's almost like we went to the same college. All the points made in this video are valid and everyone watching should take notes, blend them, and drink three times a day until you graduate.

[Joanna's Jig]

This clip looks like something I'd see on Newgrounds fifteen years ago. The artwork looks to be handmade and if it is then I can tell you've put a lot of effort and time into creating this.
The main thing that distracts me about this animation is the overwhelming amount of white-space, it makes the area look too flat even if you took the time to shade the character cell by cell it's not enough to justify the blandness of the background.

I've done frame by frame in the past, it's basic stuff that can be made into some amazing things if you really put the time and heart into it. You seem to have the drive for this kind of thing.

On your next animation try to create an environment that matches the characters you place in it to show off your art to it's full potential. Maybe even make a short story about some weird thing that happened to you as a kid, that would likely liven up your content ten fold.

[Do not you hate this happening on skype?]

Drawing skills have potential! The animation alone was not too special, but the content is relatable.
Keep up with animating, I see you creating awesome content in the future.