CannibalDolphinJuice's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shower Thoughts (Reupload)]

The longer you experience the world I believe most people think about these things but what can an average person do about it without exploring their options right?
Pee-pee jokes aside the short was rigged up really well. Great lip movement, good audio, and cool background work.
Overall impressive stuff. My one big complaint about the short though was the shower audio overpowering the speech at the start. Awesome job keep it up!

KhyleThePixelPrince responds:

Thank you!

[Toasty Crow Fan animation]

An attempt was made but it wasn't great. It looks like you're using paint and animating your art through movie maker. People may think these applications are lacking but a lot can be made with these two applications when used with patience.

Take more time and draw a few more frames. Your artwork would look better if you drew more of your characters with thicker outlines and focused detail inside the shape.
After you draw some more frames animate them in sections to get the hang of evolving your style. There are tons of videos online that show you the best ways to animate for free so I won't sit here and write step by step what you should do, just use the advice I've given you to grow.

ChillzTue responds:

THANK YOU SO MUCH :3 btw I made this a long time ago so I got a tablet and stuff like that I don't animate like like this anymore but thanks anyway!!! :333
PLEASE SENPAI DONT HATE ME xD o//o

[Bunker City Pilot]

The characters look good and the idea of the story was okay, what really pushes me back a bit though are the backgrounds and the lack of definition in them.

I find it distracting how well the characters are drawn and then seeing the large color blobs with no edges take up the space around. Next episode you guys should really invest in more detail around the areas and work on resizing the characters in those places so they're not giants in one scene and dwarfs in the other.

Overall the style is good and the humor is doable. Looking forward to the next installment.

videojunk responds:

I actually plan to spend way longer on the next episode to make it actually look good, since truthfully I'm not to satisfied with how this turned out (I had a deadline). But the next one will hopefully be alot better.

[HELLEVATOR]

Interesting twist, if this was a bit more polished I'd consider this to be a pretty decent show.
The animation style is similar to Archer or Moonbeam City and I think it'd work for the most part with this story in mind.

The way it was written gives me an overall feeling that it was a mix mash of watching late night Adult Swim and binge watching anime on the weekends and then somebody put together an idea (Not a bad one though) one afternoon on Skype.

I think if you do decide to start pursuing this as a whole attempt to add some more girth (This has potential) and try not to make another boring adult themed show but instead make a funny well written series.

UniversalHeat responds:

Thanks! I intended for this short to be a one-off, but I did write it essentially in the style of a TV series pilot. If I end up returning to this source material, I'll most likely work on giving more nuance to the setting and developing the characters, as I do think there's potential here for both a lot more jokes and a lot more plot conflict with heaven, hell, the different worlds inside this pocket universe, etc. I guess we'll see, but for now, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Gore Gang Cartoons ep01]

A arte foi interessante, nada muito grande embora quando ele veio para a dublagem. Português não é a minha língua materna, mas posso dizer coisas precisam de um pouco de trabalho. Há potencial nesta animação, mas eu não acho que ele está destinado a ser alterada.

The art was interesting, nothing too great though when it came to the voice acting. Portuguese isn't my mother tongue but I can tell things need a bit of work. There's potential in this animation, but I don't think it's intended to be altered.

imperiarte responds:

Thanx for review

[[FR]DrMescouillesMcMoncul]

Je ne comprends pas le français, mais le style de l'animation et le mouvement des personnages m'a fait penser promettant comédie aléatoire. Je pourrais apprendre le français juste pour lire cette animation.

I like the style of the animation. The character movements look to me as promising random comedy. Keep it up.

Snowkraft responds:

Thanks!
I only put this online because I was curious to see how you guys will react to it. I'm gonna make more of this in english soon!